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Listening to this since I was having a look at the previous Self-Care Jam entries, while deciding whether to sign up for the upcoming one or not. Really nice music! I like everything about it, and your singing voice is nice.

I've been writing songs for a while too but I keep getting frustrated trying to record my voice, so they're all just on paper for now. It makes me feel more confident to hear songs like this, that I think sound great, that have been recorded "casually" too and aren't fancy-studio-perfect. :-) It's the feeling that matters...

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Hi Jordan, thanks for sharing your compositions. I didn't expect to chance upon such good songwriting & singing on itch.io. What serendipity !

I found the 4 songs both poignant & meaningful. They are certainly bear repeated listening, even in 100 years' time.

Yes, the "empty room" home-made recordings are not 100% perfect (... actually, only 1 song has occasional "noise" defects, the other 3 are fine just as they are). But I am hard-pressed to consider them "messy" in any way.

Thanks for the thoughtful lyrics booklet as well. A suggestion (for future releases) would be to make the background darker. Maybe my vision is really bad (... more or less legally-blind, if extremely high-index spectacles hadn't been invented) -- I find light grey text on medium-light grey background extremely difficult to read.

Thank you so much for your kind words and feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed my songs. <3 I've added a high-contrast version of the lyrics booklet -- hopefully it'll be much more readable than the original. I will absolutely take readability into account when creating documents for future releases. (o.~)b Again, thank you so much for listening and taking the time to let me know how I can do better in the future.